Mark A. Sargent

Tag: Rewrite

  • Chapter One Rewrite

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    OK gang, I’m calling a do over. While the feedback for Clockwork & Old Gods has been generally positive, the constructive criticism I’ve received boils down to the fact that the opening doesn’t quite work. Thanks to the wonder of electronic self publishing I have an opportunity to rectify this. Below you will find two…